目录 Part 1 英语高考满分作文攻略 Section 1英语高考作文命题分析 Section 2英语高考作文误区警示 Section 3英语高考作文高分策略 《高考英语书面表达评分细则》解读 Part 2 2013年英语高考满分作文集锦 全国新课标Ⅰ卷 真题呈现 Ask Peter to Meet My Uncle at the Airport 标准范文 满分范文 名师精评提分要点积累卡片 全国新课标Ⅱ卷 真题呈现 Ask Friends to Sell Chinese Knots 标准范文 满分范文 名师精评提分要点积累卡片 ……
内容摘要 Part 1 满分作文攻略 Section 3英语高考作文高分策略 Part 1 满分作文攻略 Section 3英语高考作文高分策略 《高考英语书面表达评分细则》解读 以《2013年高考英语新课标考试说明》为例,请看高考英语书面表达评分细则: 一、各档次的给分范围和要求 (一)第五档 (很好):(21~25分) 1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。 …… 二、本题总分为25分,按五个档次给分。 三、评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整档次,最后给分。 四、词数少于 80和多于 120的,从总分中减去2分。 五、评分时,应注意的主要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性。 六、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 ... 【巩固训练】 请综合运用上述复杂结构把下列句子“合写”成语法正确、意义完整、结构复杂的句子: 1.It?s a flat of 25 square metres.There is a bedroom in the flat.There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too.In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well. →It?s a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen and in the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. 2.I?m Li Hua.I?m chairman of the student union of Yucai Middle School and our school is close to your university. →I?m Li Hua, chairman of student union of Yucai Middle School, which is close to your university. 3.We had a short rest.Then we began to play happily.We sang and danced.Some told jokes.Some played chess. →After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess. 4.Shakespeare is a son and he is from a poor family.He had little education.He wrote many plays and poems.People all over the world like his plays and poems. →Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world. 5.In Picture 1, a man simply puts up a banner.The banner reads “HAPPY EARTH DAY”.Many stumps surround him.In Picture 2, a couple is happily planting a young tree. →In Picture 1, a man simply puts up a banner reading “HAPPY EARTH DAY” with many stumps surrounding him while in Picture 2, a couple is happily planting a young tree. 书面表达高分策略之三:有效连接 依据高考英语书面表达评分细则,是否“有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑”是衡量一篇书面表达的重要标准之一。语句间的连接成分包括过渡性词语、过渡句等。过渡词犹如“桥梁”和“黏合剂”,在叙述和论述过程中,恰当地使用过渡词可避免结构松散,层次不明,表意不清等弊端,使文章条理清楚,文字连贯流畅。使用语句间的连接成分可使语言的连贯性得以实现,从而使文章过渡自然、结构严谨、富于逻辑、更具说服力。 请欣赏、揣摩高考英语书面表达范文中如何使用过渡性词语,使全文结构更紧凑: 1.递进型 标志词:besides,what?s more,let alone,worse still, moreover, even, furthermore… Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class.(2012?湖北) What?s worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake.(2012?福建) What?s more, we should analyze the reasons of failure to get success for the next time.(2013?湖南) Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.(2011?陕西) 2.解释型 标志词:that is (to say),in other words… In other words, we are the master of our own future. (2012?浙江) 3.转折型 标志词:however,but,yet,although,otherwise, instead, on the contrary… A perfect result is pleasing, but enjoying the process is also attractive.(2013?湖南) However, it is not so easy for people to realize their dreams every time.(2013?北京) But I have some difficulties with note?taking and I have no idea of how to use the library.(2011?全国) 4.列举型 标志词:firstly…secondly…finally,on the one hand , on the other hand… First and foremost, I would do a part time job so that I can gain some work experience as well as some pocket money! (2013?山东) On the one hand, we think that friendship comes first, and match comes second.On the other hand, since we all tried our best, we had no regret.(2013?湖南) For one thing, they help to improve my writing skills and broaden my horizon.For another, they can enrich my life and provide me with great fun.(2012?安徽) 5.举例型 标志词:for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take…for example… In our school, there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports.(2011?四川) We have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.(2013?辽宁) I intend to organize some activities such as English debate competitions and speech contests.(2013?天津) 6.因果型 标志词:Because (of),since,therefore,as a result,thanks to,thus,due to… Therefore, I suggest the exhibition be held in the museum. (2013?上海) As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study.(2013?山东) As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.(2013?福建) 7.让步型 标志词:as,though,although,in spite of, despite… Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.(2013?陕西) ……
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