To the Reader Part One:Unnecessary Words 1.Unnecessary Nouns and Verbs 2.Unneccessary Modifiers 3.Redundant Twins 4.Saying the Same Thing Twice 5.Repeated References to the Same Thing 6.Summing it All Up Part Two:Sentence Structure 7.The Noun Plague 8.Pronouns and Antecedents 9.The Placement of Phrases and Clauses 10.Dangling Modifiers 11.Parallel Structure 12.Logical Connectives显示全部信息
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